My thougthts on my 60s video

My thoughts on my video were varied as it was the first video I had done and in a way it was a trial And error. The thing I liked the most about my video was the clarity of my voice, you were able to hear the dialogue easily without any misunderstandings. The thing I dislike most about my video was my pauses and also my comments just because it just seemed in a way a bit messy while the rest of my words were clear and thought through. The sound for this video was good because there was no background sound which would have prevented you from hearing what I was saying. The lighting was a tad too dark for the video, this was due to the effect and time of day, however overall I thought my first video was a good attempt.